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ANIL ANDEL

I LOST MY BASKET AND GOT INTO CASKET

It was a sunny day outside. The little sparrows were chirping and urging me to get up. I was still rolling in my cozy bed. Though the day was akin to all days but it seemed to me portended for unknown reason. I was feeling somewhat sick at my stomach. I was not in mood to go to school.

Ammi got up early in morning to get me ready for school. I told her that my belly was stinging hard. She took me in her arms and caressed me. She asked me to wipe out rolling pearls of my eyes. I cannot forget the last loving moments in the company of my Ammi. She lovingly made me understood to go to school.

Ammi prepared the basket of lunch along with the school bag. She also asked Abbu to take me to school on his bike. I complained to Abbbu about my illness but he also considered it as one of the tricks to remain at home. He promised me to buy a pretty dress on my birthday which was on the next day.

Abbu dropped me at school. Some of the students were playing joyously in the garden of school. The classes were going on as usual. It was my favourite teacher’s class of English. We were getting lessons in English. I was a very attentive in the class though my stomach was aching.

Meanwhile, there we heard tumultuous sound of gun firing. Our teacher rushed and locked the door. She also asked us to silently lie on the floor. There were five to six gunmen loitering around the school. They initially fired in the air. We were too scared to hear the firing sound. The loud screaming and crying of children fetched the atmosphere of utter frightfulness. The whole school was under threat.

One of the men rushed to the door of class. He broke down the firing at us. Everyone was under life threat. We were screaming and running here and there to save ourselves. The baskets and the schoolbags were strewn everywhere.

I came to learn that I had got a bullet in that messy situation. I fell down on the floor unconscious.

I saw my body was being carried into casket after an hour. My Ammi and Abbu were crying and mourning for me. Ammi was wailing. She was blaming herself why she had sent forcefully to me to school on that ominous day. My Abbu had been planning to celebrate my tenth birthday the next day. He was feeling void for not fulfilling his promise to buy me a pretty dress. Ammi soon went in
unconsciousness and fell down.

I have never thought that I would lose my basket and get into casket for no fault.

“ I lost my dream of being a good human being,
  playing with friends and wondering in dreams.
  I lost my family for no fault,
  Why people hold innocent at the point of colt?”
                                                                            – PROF. ANIL ANDEL

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Chetan Jaiswal

The philosophy of truth along with sentimentality.

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Jagdish Fartade

Would like to read more stories from you professor

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Ravindra panpatil

Nice sirji

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Ravindra panpatil

Nice story..Keep writing..

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SANDIP DHAMALE

‘Superb way of penning that brings inhuman cruelty which destroys life of innocents being at no fault. Sometimes laziness may save your life! Moral, why the innocence always get penalized?
Congratulation for such wonderful writing. Keep continue. All the best!’

Regards,
Prof. Sandip Dhamale

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Ashwin Patil

Very nicely crafted sir! Heart rendering!!! Keep pouring out your words and emotions one way or the other. Keep writing! Greetings for the future ventures!!!

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Sandesh Ravindra Ninawe

Very touching tale of crushed promise of life. Feeling sad for the poor child. Poignantly portrayed. Keep it up. Let the brilliance of the mighty pen shine through the world.

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Milind R Patil

Very heart touching

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Dr S R Patil

Really nice and thought provoking sir

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Jayesh Morankar

Superb sir🤩

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Asst. Prof. Siddharth Patil

Catchy and touchy in a satirical way… Eager to read more from the author.

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Asst. Prof. Siddharth Patil

Catchy and touchy in a satirical way…

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Shravan Banasure

Good…

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Dilip Talhande

Very nice… Best use of phrases and polished language which can be understood easily. Best luck for future

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AMOL CHAUDHARI

Nice writing sir…. Story gives innocent touch and arise a question in mind….Congratulation for such beautiful writing …keep writing. All the best!!!!

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Nitin Pote

Indeed an interesting story raising curiosity of the readers. Keep it up, Sirji!

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Anonymous

Superb story

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Hetal ingale

Nice story sir☺

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Prof Roman Janbandhu

Good one sir, thanks for keeping the story really short..Haaaa haaaa…

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Prof Roman Janbandhu

Good one sir, thanks for keeping the story really short, Haaaa Haaaa..

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Anonymous

Nice sir

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Prerana Bhagatkar

Nice keep it up👍 😊

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Harshal Suresh Thale

Nice Story Sir

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Sahil Karlekar

Great! What an emotional short story written by you sir.. .I’m very glad towards you sir. Moreover, The innocent child has no more future. The child had lost his ambitions , dreams and goals. Also, the child’s mother measly to ourselves for this messy situation of his/her child. I felt very sad about the child and wanted to express my emotions via writing more. But, as you know ”words can’t express deep emotion”. Also. Thanking you.. and superb story sir

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ANIL ANDEL

Thank you Sahil

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Ashay Devidas Shende

Nice Story Sir……Keep writing…..I expect more stories from you sir

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ANIL ANDEL

Sure air. Thank you for encouraging words

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ANIL ANDEL

Sure sir. Thank you for encouraging words

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Akhilesh Hiralal Pande

English Researcher… 💯 %perfect story writing by perfect writer prof Anil sir.. Great sir.. Proud of you

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ANIL ANDEL

Thank you sir

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Prashant Aragade

Great Sirji.

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ANIL ANDEL

Thank you sir

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Dhammaratna Waghmare

Nice one.

Eagerly waiting to read more stories from u sir.

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Anil Andel

Thank you sir.

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Shubham Dudhe

It pictures that how someones bad karma changes anothers fate …..good story sir …would like to read more from you …

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Shubham Dudhe

Good story sir ….it pictures that how someones bad karma changes the fate of anothers …..would like to read more from you sir ….👍🙏

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ANIL ANDEL

Thank you Shubham

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Anuj Kolte

He seems to not have the capacity to show emotion

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Anuj Kolte

Such a wonderful story and painfull also
You are. Good writer sir

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