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ANIL ANDEL

I LOST MY BASKET AND GOT INTO CASKET

It was a sunny day outside. The little sparrows were chirping and urging me to get up. I was still rolling in my cozy bed. Though the day was akin to all days but it seemed to me portended for unknown reason. I was feeling somewhat sick at my stomach. I was not in mood to go to school.

Ammi got up early in morning to get me ready for school. I told her that my belly was stinging hard. She took me in her arms and caressed me. She asked me to wipe out rolling pearls of my eyes. I cannot forget the last loving moments in the company of my Ammi. She lovingly made me understood to go to school.

Ammi prepared the basket of lunch along with the school bag. She also asked Abbu to take me to school on his bike. I complained to Abbbu about my illness but he also considered it as one of the tricks to remain at home. He promised me to buy a pretty dress on my birthday which was on the next day.

Abbu dropped me at school. Some of the students were playing joyously in the garden of school. The classes were going on as usual. It was my favourite teacher’s class of English. We were getting lessons in English. I was a very attentive in the class though my stomach was aching.

Meanwhile, there we heard tumultuous sound of gun firing. Our teacher rushed and locked the door. She also asked us to silently lie on the floor. There were five to six gunmen loitering around the school. They initially fired in the air. We were too scared to hear the firing sound. The loud screaming and crying of children fetched the atmosphere of utter frightfulness. The whole school was under threat.

One of the men rushed to the door of class. He broke down the firing at us. Everyone was under life threat. We were screaming and running here and there to save ourselves. The baskets and the schoolbags were strewn everywhere.

I came to learn that I had got a bullet in that messy situation. I fell down on the floor unconscious.

I saw my body was being carried into casket after an hour. My Ammi and Abbu were crying and mourning for me. Ammi was wailing. She was blaming herself why she had sent forcefully to me to school on that ominous day. My Abbu had been planning to celebrate my tenth birthday the next day. He was feeling void for not fulfilling his promise to buy me a pretty dress. Ammi soon went in
unconsciousness and fell down.

I have never thought that I would lose my basket and get into casket for no fault.

“ I lost my dream of being a good human being,
  playing with friends and wondering in dreams.
  I lost my family for no fault,
  Why people hold innocent at the point of colt?”
                                                                            – PROF. ANIL ANDEL

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55 thoughts on “I LOST MY BASKET AND GOT INTO CASKET

  1. Chetan Jaiswal says:

    The philosophy of truth along with sentimentality.

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      thank you.

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  2. Jagdish Fartade says:

    Would like to read more stories from you professor

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Sure sir. thank you

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  3. Ravindra panpatil says:

    Nice sirji

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  4. Ravindra panpatil says:

    Nice story..Keep writing..

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir. friends like you are the real source of inspiration for me.

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  5. SANDIP DHAMALE says:

    ‘Superb way of penning that brings inhuman cruelty which destroys life of innocents being at no fault. Sometimes laziness may save your life! Moral, why the innocence always get penalized?
    Congratulation for such wonderful writing. Keep continue. All the best!’

    Regards,
    Prof. Sandip Dhamale

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir. friends like you are the real source of inspiration for me.

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  6. Ashwin Patil says:

    Very nicely crafted sir! Heart rendering!!! Keep pouring out your words and emotions one way or the other. Keep writing! Greetings for the future ventures!!!

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  7. Sandesh Ravindra Ninawe says:

    Very touching tale of crushed promise of life. Feeling sad for the poor child. Poignantly portrayed. Keep it up. Let the brilliance of the mighty pen shine through the world.

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    1. Milind R Patil says:

      Very heart touching

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  8. Dr S R Patil says:

    Really nice and thought provoking sir

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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  9. Jayesh Morankar says:

    Superb sir🤩

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you dear

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  10. Asst. Prof. Siddharth Patil says:

    Catchy and touchy in a satirical way… Eager to read more from the author.

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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  11. Asst. Prof. Siddharth Patil says:

    Catchy and touchy in a satirical way…

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  12. Shravan Banasure says:

    Good…

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you

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  13. Dilip Talhande says:

    Very nice… Best use of phrases and polished language which can be understood easily. Best luck for future

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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  14. AMOL CHAUDHARI says:

    Nice writing sir…. Story gives innocent touch and arise a question in mind….Congratulation for such beautiful writing …keep writing. All the best!!!!

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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  15. Nitin Pote says:

    Indeed an interesting story raising curiosity of the readers. Keep it up, Sirji!

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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    2. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you

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  16. Anonymous says:

    Superb story

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you

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  17. Hetal ingale says:

    Nice story sir☺

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  18. Prof Roman Janbandhu says:

    Good one sir, thanks for keeping the story really short..Haaaa haaaa…

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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  19. Prof Roman Janbandhu says:

    Good one sir, thanks for keeping the story really short, Haaaa Haaaa..

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  20. Anonymous says:

    Nice sir

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you

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  21. Prerana Bhagatkar says:

    Nice keep it up👍 😊

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you

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  22. Harshal Suresh Thale says:

    Nice Story Sir

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you

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  23. Sahil Karlekar says:

    Great! What an emotional short story written by you sir.. .I’m very glad towards you sir. Moreover, The innocent child has no more future. The child had lost his ambitions , dreams and goals. Also, the child’s mother measly to ourselves for this messy situation of his/her child. I felt very sad about the child and wanted to express my emotions via writing more. But, as you know ”words can’t express deep emotion”. Also. Thanking you.. and superb story sir

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you Sahil

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  24. Ashay Devidas Shende says:

    Nice Story Sir……Keep writing…..I expect more stories from you sir

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Sure air. Thank you for encouraging words

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      1. ANIL ANDEL says:

        Sure sir. Thank you for encouraging words

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  25. Prashant Aragade says:

    Great Sirji.

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you sir

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  26. ANIL ANDEL says:

    Thank you sir

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  27. Dhammaratna Waghmare says:

    Nice one.

    Eagerly waiting to read more stories from u sir.

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    1. Anil Andel says:

      Thank you sir.

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  28. Shubham Dudhe says:

    It pictures that how someones bad karma changes anothers fate …..good story sir …would like to read more from you …

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  29. Shubham Dudhe says:

    Good story sir ….it pictures that how someones bad karma changes the fate of anothers …..would like to read more from you sir ….👍🙏

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    1. ANIL ANDEL says:

      Thank you Shubham

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  30. Anuj Kolte says:

    He seems to not have the capacity to show emotion

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  31. Anuj Kolte says:

    Such a wonderful story and painfull also
    You are. Good writer sir

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